Laurette+Steele

A mother kills her unborn child because it is unwanted, but she's not charged for murder. Is it right? There is about 46 million abortions per year worldwide, and approximately 115,000 per day, but why? Is it because rape or incest, health problems with either the mother or the child, or just because the baby's unwanted or inconvenient at the time? (The Alan Guttmacher Institute.) Abortion should be banned because too many babies are being killed from abortion, if you don't want a child you could always put it up for adoption, and most mothers don't understand the consequences that occur from abortion. Is there really a difference between abortion and murder? If a doctor killed a child one minute after it was born it would be murder, but if a doctor killed a child one minute before the child was born it would be the mothers choice. 52% of abortions occur before the 9th week of pregnancy, 25% happen between the 9th & 10th week, 12% happen between the 11th and 12th week, 6% happen between the 13th & 15th week, 4% happen between the 16th & 20th week, and 1% of all abortions happen after the 20th week of pregnancy. (The Alan Guttmacher Institute.) You could have a baby that's born at week 22 and still have a 15% chance of living. (Siegel, Reva) If the mothers didn't want the babies she could have always put them up for adoption. There are 1.5 million adopted children in the United States. If the parents weren't ready to have to a child, instead of abortion there's adoption. There are different types of adoption. Foster care adoption is the adoption of children in state care for whom reunification with their birth parents is not possible for safety or other reasons. Private adoption can be arranged either through an agency or through independent adoption. Adoption is a lot safer than abortion, if people knew the facts about abortion i bet they'd rather give their child for adoption rather than having an abortion. Abortion can cause many different complications with future pregnancies, or just complications like bladder injury, or breast cancer. In future pregnancies you'd be less likely to have a normal delivery, and the baby is more likely to be premature. (Arvay et al.) If you were going to take this big of a risk, wouldn't you rather just choose adoption? A mother kills her unborn child because it is unwanted, but she's not charged for murder. Is it right? There is about 46 million abortions per year worldwide, and approximately 115,000 per day, but why? Is it because rape or incest, health problems with either the mother or the child, or just because the baby's unwanted or inconvenient at the time? Abortion should be banned because too many babies are being killed from abortion, if you don't want a child you could always put it up for adoption, and most mothers don't understand the consequences that occur from abortion. Is there really a difference between abortion and murder? If a doctor killed a child one minute after it was born it would be murder, but if a doctor killed a child one minute before the child was born it would be the mothers choice. 52% of abortions occur before the 9th week of pregnancy, 25% happen between the 9th & 10th week, 12% happen between the 11th and 12th week, 6% happen between the 13th & 15th week, 4% happen between the 16th & 20th week, and 1% of all abortions happen after the 20th week of pregnancy. You could have a baby that's born at week 22 and still have a 15% chance of living. If the mothers didn't want the babies she could have always put them up for adoption. There are 1.5 million adopted children in the United States. If the parents weren't ready to have to a child, instead of abortion there's adoption. There are different types of adoption. Foster care adoption is the adoption of children in state care for whom reunification with their birth parents is not possible for safety or other reasons. Private adoption can be arranged either through an agency or through independent adoption. Adoption is a lot safer than abortion, if people knew the facts about abortion i bet they'd rather give their child for adoption rather than having an abortion. Abortion can cause many different complications with future pregnancies, or just complications like bladder injury, or breast cancer. In future pregnancies you'd be less likely to have a normal delivery, and the baby is more likely to be premature. If you were going to take this big of a risk, wouldn't you rather just choose adoption?

Ok Laurette. THis is a start, but I think we have to work on this a little bit more. What is your three part thesis here? It could be something like "Steve should not be convicted of felony murder because he didn't do anything wrong, he is actually a good kid, and he works hard in school and life." = Then, you would back this up in your body paragraphs. = = = = = =Steve is on trail for murder.When he didn't do anything wrong. All he did was walk in a store look for some mints and leave. No harm in that.But he did hang out with the wrong people he amitted it.He is not gulity at the end. Here are 3 examples from the passage.All i did was walk in a store look for some mints and left.I hung out with the wrong people.He has been found not gulity=

= = =All he does is walk in a store and look for mints no harm in that.If you walk in to a store look for something cant find it.Is that so wrong.I guess it was for them.=

=He hung out with the wrong people.he did he admttied it.he didnt lie about it=

=At the end of the story he was not guilty.=

= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =My mom is the most caring person.She birthed me on feb 26 5:02 pm. She is 4 "11". Smart and loving.= Shes my favorite person.she birthed me thats how we met. She always takes care of me. She takes me shopping.Out to eat.And we have girl days 20 a year. If u know her like i know her you would agree all the way no bits buts about it.

by Lauretteb boxing legands =Sugar Ray Phillips = Sugar Ray Phillips who owns a boxing gym in Dallas called ‘Big Sugar Ray’s Real Deal Boxing Gym’. Phillips had an impressive amateur record of 145-6 and he won a National Golden Gloves title to his credit. As a professional, he is best known for his 1977 bout against Marvelous Marvin Hagler. Still closely connected with boxing, Phillips is an avid fan of the sport who had some interesting things to say about news pertaining to a potential showdown = Sugar Ray Leonard = = Muhammad Ali = born January 17, 1942) is an American former professional boxer, philanthropist and social activist . Considered a cultural icon , Ali was both idolised and vilified . Originally known as Cassius Clay, Ali changed his name after joining the Nation of Islam in 1964, subsequently converting to Sunni Islam in 1975, and more recently to Sufism . In 1967, three years after Ali had won the World Heavyweight Championship , he was publicly vilified for his refusal to be conscripted into the U.S. military , based on his religious beliefs and opposition to the Vietnam War – "I ain't got no quarrel with them Viet Cong... No Vietcong ever called me nigger " – one of the more telling remarks of the era.
 * Sugar Ray Leonard** (born May 17, 1956) is an American retired professional boxer and occasional actor. He was named **Ray Charles Leonard**, after his mother's favorite singer, ray charles. Leonard was the first boxer to earn more than $100 million in purses, and he is widely considered to be one of the best boxers of all time, winning world titles in five weight divisions and defeating future fellow international boxing hall of fame Leonard was named "Boxer of the Decade" for the 1980s.

Did your mom every say she didnt want to do something and still had to do it. Mine did. " jump jump jump" I said as i jumped on my couch. While my mom was eating dinner. "Be careful" my mom said. "I dont want to have to go to the hospital." Ok" i said . I jumped 6 more times and jumped off. Then i jumped 10 more times then jumped off and boom.Shards of glass in my foot . I screamed " Ahaaaa"" it hurts". I say while i cry. "go put your foot in cold water" my mom said. Then she caried me to the bathroom.

Great start Laurette- I'm excited to read the rest. You are a very talented writer. Good job.

I passed out.They put a air mask on me.Then they tried to stop the bleeding.It doesnt work.My mom was pancking."O my god". Shes screaming alot. I lost a lot of blood.I got to the hospital.And they put an iv in my arm.I woke up and saw my mom. She was happy. Then i ate. they put me under anastesia so i would go to sleep.I got my footed stiched. then i went home.

=MY OUTLINE ESSAY= = = =Kids are reading less and less.If kids read less and less their fluency will be bad. Kids wont be as intelligent. Kids wont get as a good job when they grow up.= =Their intelligance will go down. Meaing ont be as smart.Wont get in a good college.Thats a bad thing. Intelligance is very important. espacilly if you want to get into a private school.= =Their fluency will be really bad. Wont talk as well as the average person. They wont get be in the advance reading class.= =They will have a bad chance of getting a god job. Get paid minnum wage. Wont get into a as good reading school.= =So see if you dont read like you should you'll be stupid. Bad chance to get a good job. Bad fluency.Minnum wage.=